Alhamdulillah…
My first poem in English.
My first poem in English.
Would like to dedicate to my beloved Mother M.K. Wajeeha Ammal and to my beloved Father M.K. Bahurudeen - Allah Yarham, to my teachers, and to all my well wishers particularly NAS Sir, brothers Mr. Sabeer, and Mr. (Kaviyanban) Abul Kalam who encouraged my creative sense to bring these lines of edges out of me.
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Make your being at limitless edge
Keep Almighty in depth of soul…
True prosperity her selfless edge
Take your mother into deeper heart…
Knowledge is not real edge
Once not realize it in practice…
Experience gives poised edge
Wisdom born by still being…
Create collective greatest edge
Thoughts around greater minds…
Gentle minds touch humane edge
Harmony makes superior clans…
Synergy seekers attain edge
With true bond of selflessness…
Coherent thoughts obtain edge
By communion of similar souls…
B. Ahamed Ameen
28 Responses So Far:
Dear brother B.Ahmed Ameen,
Assalamu Alaikkum varah...
Congratulations on your first poem, which if not marked so I wouldn't take it as the first one.
Your poetry contains everything it has to, enriched with lateral thoughts in addition.
Thanks that you honored my request and produced such an enthusiastic impressive lines. It's really WOW.
I really wonder how many more talents are still kept hidden in our United Streets of Adirai and I would possibly bring 'em out if I get a clue.
I once thought that I found you a platform but let me change my view on you as "this platform lucky to find you".
Thanks to Adirai Nirubar for putting contineous efforts in enlightening talented personalities.
All the thoughts in the poem has strongly been quoted though, the most impressing thought for me is:
//Gentle minds touch humane edge
Harmony makes superior clans…//
The reason for me to like stands very much personal.
Good work and keep going brother.
Welcome Bro.Ameen..First of all, this poem gets luminous because it is dedicated to your parents who they powered you
Each & every lines are telling, the way of your thinking …great work buddy, Keep going..Allah Bless you
Bro Ahmed Ameen,
As I mentioned earlier, started writing few lines in this title but I was not able to give a finishing touch.
It now looks so amateur in front of yours :-)
The Edges:
Life is such a race
Lengthy which a chase
Not that you need wings
Until you reach edges
Keep that run alive
Leave them all behind
You got all your rights
Up to their nose edges
After all a fly
Not that it can cry
why not human try
to open heart and fly
Welldone Mr.B. Ahamed Ameen. I wish you all the best by the grace of Allah to c make more poems in English from today onwards. இங்லீஸ் போயத்திற்கு டமிலில் கமெண்ட்ஸ் சொன்னால் செல்லாதோ?????
//இங்லீஸ் போயத்திற்கு டமிலில் கமெண்ட்ஸ் சொன்னால் செல்லாதோ?????// நாட்டாமை உங்க தீர்ப்பை நான் வரவேற்க்கின்றேன்
Dear brother B.Ahmed Ameen,
Congratulations on your first poem,Keep going..Allah Bless you
Dear Brother B. Ahamed Ameen,
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR FIRST POEM PUBLISHED IN ADIRAI NIRUBAR. I WISH AND PRAY FOR MANY MORE TO COME.
I STRONGLY BELIEVE THAT YOU POSSESS THOSE ABILITIES BY THE MERCY OF ALMIGHTY ALLAH. ALLAH BLESS YOU.
Assalaamu alaikkum brother Ameen,
Thanks for accepting our request and posting your poems promptly.I was sure you would pull it off. You are an absolute gem!
\\Knowledge is not real edge
Once not realize it in practice…
Experience gives poised edge
Wisdom born by still being…//
Wow. amazing lines to save in think-bank. This information is worth a pound.You gave it straight from the hip. You are a wonder.
Sound knowledge in managing the critical areas of life will authorize us to completely take charge of our life as we walk on the edge of a knife.
Assalamu Alaikkum
Thanks very much Adirai Nirubar for publishing the poem.
Thanks brother Mr. Sabeer, brother Yaseer, brother MSM. Naina Mohamed, brother Irfan for your encouragement and dua.
Brother Mr. Sabeer, your lines of "The Edges" has high velocity and motivating the minds whoever grasp the meanings by reading between lines. And its your maturity that you lower yourself by comparing my lines and highlight them to a better one. Thanks a lot.
I tried identifying some pattern in the poem lines above.
First of all it starts from
* God Almighty the creator, highiest value to our soul in remembering him
* Our mother who brought us out, much greatness we get by blessings of mother in the universe.
* Our awareness and knowledge in the mind, and experience,
* Our interaction with world around us and developing, becoming independent
* And ultimately becoming interdependent, which is ultimate edge for anyone to win.
Starting with soul and ending with uniting the souls to become powerful one.
I encourage expect all brothers/sisters without hesitating to try your best to express your thoughts as comments both English and Tamil.
First of all welcome Br.Ahamed Ameen,
Each & every lines are telling, the way of your thinking …great work....
//express your thoughts as comments both English and Tamil.//
அப்பாடா !
ஃபிரான்சிஸ் சார் கிளாசில் தாஜுதீன் சாரும், ராமச்சந்திரன் சாரும் அடிக்கடி ஞாபகத்துக்கு வருவாங்க...
thanks : Ctrl+C with Ctrl+V
Assalamu Alaikkum
Thanks a lot brother Mr. Ebrahim Ansari for your appreciation and great hope and expectations from me. And by your blessings and dua for me may be accepted by God Almighty, InshaAllah.
I am much thankful to brother Kaviyanban Mr. Abul Kalam, and your motivation and push is appreciated from my depth of heart.
Thanks a lot brother Mr. M. NainaThambi. AbuIbrahim for your valuable feedback and cooperation.
Well, I should mention that the photograph taken by Zakir's son Afsal is a real thought provoking one, which inspired me with the title THE EDGES.
Thanks to Afsal as well.
Masha Allah ,,,, first poem in Adirai nirubar may allah bless you .... We are waiting for your next poem
// am much thankful to brother Kaviyanban Mr. Abul Kalam, and your motivation and push is appreciated from my depth of heart.//
I should also thank to you for your motivation and suggestion to write an article in English Language as you mentioned in Adirai Express' comment column. Hence, In Sha Allah, you will see my article, "BORN TO WIN" (in English Language) in Adirai Express as they have already permitted me to publish. This is really out of your motivation and I shall appreciate from core of my heart.
Assalamu Alaikkum,
The photograph is an excellent, meaningful and inspirational. Thanks brother Afsal, it complements the poetry with clarity and inspiration. I appreciate brother Mr. Sabeer for directing, recommending in visual aspects of publications too.
Thanks a lot Mr. Imran Kareem for your blessings and dua.
//I should also thank to you for your motivation and suggestion to write an article in English Language as you mentioned in Adirai Express' comment column. Hence, In Sha Allah, you will see my article, "BORN TO WIN" (in English Language) in Adirai Express as they have already permitted me to publish. This is really out of your motivation and I shall appreciate from core of my heart.//
Thanks very much Kaviyanban Mr. Abdul Kalam for your valuable comments.
Alhamdulillah, I had been internally a little motivating factor in positive way to encourage contributors/readers to write in English also. We expect 'Born To Win' soon, InshaAllah.
//I once thought that I found you a platform but let me change my view on you as "this platform lucky to find you"//
Dear brother Mr. Sabeer,
I must say Alhamdulillah - All praise goes to The God Almighty Allah.
Those lines written as poem was written with an unknown power - Almighty Allah, in a single sitting non stopping continuous flow of thoughts around 30 minutes time frame.
Then written my dedication note and on the same moment I submitted to publish.
Then I read those lines it seems not a list of vocabulary I had known, but an order of thought reflections of pattern and principles
I have been learning, observing and exploring. MashaAllah brother Yasir identified it and quoted in his comment succinctly as follows.
//Each & every lines are telling, the way of your thinking …great work buddy, Keep going..Allah Bless you//
May God Almighty bless you too.
எனக்கு ஆங்கில புலமை இல்லை
ஆனால் ஆங்கிலத்தில் ஒரு புத்தகம்
வெளியிட ஆசை ..பு த்தகத்தின்
பெயரும் தயார் ..உலகம் முழுவதும்
பேசப்படும் புத்தகமாக இருக்கும் என்ற நம்பிக்கை
எனனக்கு உண்டு ..சகோ அமீன் ,சகோ கவி சபீர் காக்கா
கவியன்பன் காக்கா போன்றோர் உதவியுடன்
களத்தில் இறங்கலாமா ...புத்தகத்தின் பெயர்
"ஒப்பீனியன் பிரிட்ஜ் ' பதில் தாருங்களேன்
கங்ராஜுலேஸன்ஸ்,
வர வர நிருபர் இங்லீஸ் மீடியத்துக்கு மாறுதே!
தமிழுக்கே குழந்தை, அப்பரம் இதுக்கெல்லாம்!
தமிழ் வாழ்க!
Thanks to Brother Ameen
Jafar please motive our youths to share here English scripts too.
Abdul Razik
Dubai
Make your being at limitless edge
Keep Almighty in depth of soul…
True prosperity her selfless edge
Take your mother into deeper heart…
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Assalamualikum
yes edges is not end point
Its starting point of other side
In our life dad and mom is begin and edges
we are small page of life.
ALLAH is god of all
There mom and dad also HIS slave!
well written by br AMEEN. keep write something always for our community !
வாழ்த்துக்கள் சகோ அமீன், இது மாதிரி நிறைய தந்து ஆங்கில புலமையை மெருகேற்ற கேட்டுக்கொள்கிறேன், எனது துஆ என்றென்ரும் உண்டு
// Make your being at limitless edge//
// By communion of similar souls…//
முதல் வரியும் கடைசி வரியும் சேர்த்தால் கூட ஒரு கவிதை மாதிரி இருக்கிறது.
Dear Sidheek Kaka,
Do u recall once in your mind about our "Guide Tuition Center “ at Vandipet a decade(10years) before. We shared to serve with college, school students and too the guys who endeavored to migrate western countries. That time I found their desire and sweet sensation to learn English communication. Now? Vanished!!!!!!
I really welcome Mr. Ameen to issue his articles and comments in English cause of 90% of Adirai Nirubar contributors are focusing in Tamil.
Abdul Razik
Dubai
Assalamu Alaikkum
Dear brother Siddiq,
I am ready in cooperating with you to realize your desire to publish a book in English 'Opinion Bridge'. InshaAllah.
Thanks brother Mr. M.H. Jaffer Sadeq for congratulating, and commenting.
Mr. Abdul Razik's appreciation and encouragement for learning and writing English is valuable to all of us. Thanks a lot brother. Your concern over our people's development and your initiatives by setting up as an example(yourself writing in English) is great.
I have to thank brother Mr. Crown for his feedback.
I appreciate and accept well wish of Mr. Abdul Malik.
Brother Mr. Zakir Hussain, Thanks for your re-arranging the lines and creating extra edge for my lines.
FIRST OF ALL WELCOME DEAR BR. AHMED AMEEN,
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR FIRST POEM PUBLISHED IN ADIRAI NIRUBAR. I WISH AND PRAY FOR MANY MORE TO COME.
THANK YOU
Thanks a lot brother Mr. Abdul Jaleel for your greetings and prayer.
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